Published: 15 December 2025

Two painters and Jarret

a birthday poem for my son

Jarret is in a Miro
because I say so.
If I had a camera with me
I could prove it.
Look, the lines, squiggles
around him and he looks
a little like a squiggle himself.
My thoughts frame in
coherence with Miro.
Jarret has fallen into a plane,
a mark among twists.
There’s a question whether this is a picture
or something or just a
collection of slippery shapes;
it looks like a face
it might be a place.
Jarret is standing past/above/somewhere
beyond a nose.
A pithy branch unravels,
the colour of eyebrows
etched in sand. There’s a red
croquet ball to the right,
same height as Jarret’s head,
now, just another eyeball
according to my sight.
I paint in a mouth because there
should be one. Lips Spanish blue.
I don’t have a camera.
I take a picture and say,
“looks like a painting by Miro.”

I gaze at you. The glancing sun rays of spring
have muted the neon glow of your cheeks
made your translucent flesh alabaster
rose. I wish I had a camera.
You are lost in a field of vibrant green.
Green shoots in the trees, green leaves like rain.
Only apple blossoms and clouds in the sky
paint a counterpoint to the riot of green.
                                                                 And you.
Your eyes are grey, windy, distant, you have
slipped into reverie, lost to this world, this instant.
Your blond hair ripples a small start in this field
that is enormous and intimate. Everything frames you.
As surely as the skies turn, sun burns, you have
strayed into a painting by Renoir. If I could take a picture
I would show you some day when you question
bacchanales and pastorales, elegies, odes and sonnets,
I would show you how the light shone this day
from within you, illuminating this landscape, this poem.
I make a picture and save it for you. It is by Renoir.

More Poetry:

Mom on deck

Call for Mom.
She’s needed on deck;
no one else will do.
Who could possibly replace her?
Santa Claus or God?

Epochs of taste

Paleocene had a light tawny appearance and a semi sweet palate.
Eocene was the name of donkey in a play by Sophocles that became an eponym for stink.

silver

some people say
black is the colour of chic

ode to D. H. Lawrence

this evening, my neighbour’s red brick chimney,
lit by the dying sun, glows brilliant carmine
against a pure black blue sky that penetrates my blood
and fills me with insensate ecstasy

the perfection of spring

the moment before the rain
after the garden has been planted
while children play, the air riven
with silver laughter, let them be
soon it will rain

the frequency of spring

the frequency of spring
tunes in on any radio, any
electro-static device including
the nerve network of all operating
bio-chemical self aware systems

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Paleocene had a light tawny appearance and a semi sweet palate.
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